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Writing Task 1 – Bar Graph

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Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

SAMPLE ANSWER 1

WRITING TASK 1 – BAR GRAPH

From the given bar chart that depicts the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. For the production of electricity, the 1st rank is China that have 5,318 billion kwh, the 2nd rank is United States that have 4,049 billion kwh, the 3rd rank is Russia that have 1057 billion kwh, the 4th rank is Japan that have 9302 billion kwh, the 5th rank is India that have 841 billion kwh, the 6th rank that is Canada generate 618.9 billion kwh, 7th rank that is France have 561.2 billion kwh, 8th rank that is Brazil produce 590.4 bilion kwh, 9th rank that is Germany have 526.6 billion kwh and 10th rank that is Republic of Korea produce 485.1 billion kwh. For the consumption of electricity, 1st rank that is China acquire 5,322 billion kwh, 2nd rank that is United States have 3,866 billion kwh, 3rd is Russia that have 1,078 billion kwh, 4th rank that is Japan have 856.9 billion kwh, 5th rank that is India have 698.8 billion kwh, 6th rank that is Germany have 582.5 billion kwh, 7th rank that is Canada have 499.9 kwh, 8th rank that is France have 462.9 billion kwh, 9th rank that is Brazil have 455.8 kwh and 10th is Republic of Korea that have a total of 449.5 billion kwh.

From the information, the nation that have the most in production and consumption is China. The country that have the least in production and use is Republic of Korea.

Almost all the country have production more than consumption of electricity, except Germany that have use more than production.

(238 words)

This is an answer which achieved a Band 6.0 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

This response is rather mechanical as it lists the countries in order of production and consumption of electricity, identifies the countries that produce and consume most and least and notes the fact that all the countries except Germany produce more than they consume. However, the writing is supported by data, although there are some errors in the figures. Organisation is limited and there are few examples of cohesive devices; similarly the range of vocabulary is limited although just adequate for the task. There is a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but complex forms are mainly inaccurate.

SAMPLE ANSWER 2

WRITING TASK 1 – BAR GRAPH

The bar graph that show the best ten nations for the creation and utilization of power in 2014. For the creation of power, the 1 position is China that have 5,318 billion kwh, the 2 position is United States that have 4,049 billion kwh, the 3 position is Russia that have 1057 billion kwh, the 4 position is Japan that have 9302 billion kwh, the 5 position is India that have 841 billion kwh, the rank that is Canada have 618.9 billion kwh, seventh position that is France have 561.2 billion kwh, eighth position that is Brazil have 590.4 bilion kwh, ninth position that is Germany have 526.6 billion kwh and tenth position that is Republic of Korea have 485.1 billion kwh. For the utilization of power, first position that is China have 5,322 billion kwh, second position that is United States have 3,866 billion kwh, third is Russia that have 1,078 billion kwh, fourth position that is Japan have 856.9 billion kwh, fifth position that is India have 698.8 billion kwh, sixth position that is Germany have 582.5 billion kwh, seventh position that is Canada have 499.9 kwh, eighth position that is France have 462.9 billion kwh, ninth position that is Brazil have 455.8 kwh and tenth is Republic of korea that have 449.5 billion kwh.

From the data, the nation that have the most underway and utilization is China. The nation that have the least underway and utilization is Republic of Korea.

Practically all the nation have creation more than utilization, aside from Germany that have utilization more than creation.

(230 words)

This is an answer which achieved a Band 6.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

This answer is somewhat mechanical as it records the nations arranged by creation and utilization of power, distinguishes the nations that deliver and expend most and least and notes the way that all the nations with the exception of Germany produce more than they devour. Be that as it may, the composing is upheld by information, in spite of the fact that there are a few blunders in the figures. Association is constrained and there are not many instances of firm gadgets; comparatively the scope of jargon is restricted albeit only sufficient for the assignment. There is a blend of straightforward and complex sentence structures, however complex structures are for the most part incorrect.

SAMPLE ANSWER 3

The reference chart that show the best ten countries for the creation and use of intensity in 2014. For the making of intensity, the 1 position is China that have 5,318 billion kwh, the 2 position is United States that have 4,049 billion kwh, the 3 position is Russia that have 1057 billion kwh, the 4 position is Japan that have 9302 billion kwh, the 5 position is India that have 841 billion kwh, the rank that is Canada have 618.9 billion kwh, seventh position that is France have 561.2 billion kwh, eighth position that is Brazil have 590.4 bilion kwh, ninth position that is Germany have 526.6 billion kwh and tenth position that is Republic of Korea have 485.1 billion kwh. For the usage of intensity, first position that is China have 5,322 billion kwh, second position that is United States have 3,866 billion kwh, third is Russia that have 1,078 billion kwh, fourth position that is Japan have 856.9 billion kwh, fifth position that is India have 698.8 billion kwh, 6th position that is Germany have 582.5 billion kwh, seventh position that is Canada have 499.9 kwh, eighth position that is France have 462.9 billion kwh, ninth position that is Brazil have 455.8 kwh and tenth is Republic of korea that have 449.5 billion kwh.

For all intents and purposes all the country have creation more than use, beside Germany that have usage more than creation.

From the information, the country that have the most in progress and usage is China. The country that have the least in progress and use is Republic of Korea.

(195 words)

This is an answer which achieved a Band 6.0 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

This answer is to some degree mechanical as it records the countries organized by creation and usage of intensity, recognizes the countries that convey and exhaust most and least and notes the way that all the countries except for Germany produce more than they eat up. In any case, the forming is maintained by data, despite the way that there are a couple of goofs in the figures. Affiliation is compelled and there are very few occasions of firm devices; similarly the extent of language is confined but just adequate for the task. There is a mix of direct and complex sentence structures, anyway complex structures are generally wrong.

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Writing Task 1 (Map)

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WRITING TASK 1 (MAP)

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 (MAP)

SAMPLE ANSWER 1

WRITING TASK 1 (MAP)

The provided plans illustrate the layout of the university’s sports centre at the present time and the way it will look after a reconstruction.

According to the new layout, the redeveloped sports centre is going to become much bigger. First, the gym is going to be larger and an additional changing room is going to appear in it. Besides, there is going to be a sports shop and a cafe in the reception area. Apart from that, 2 dance studios are seems to work opposite the gym. Finally, the sports centre is going to have a new leisure pool. It is going to be constructed the place where the outdoor courts used to be. As can be seen from the new layout, both of the outdoor courts are going to be replaced by other facilities in the renovated sports centre. Along with it, a sports hall is going to appear in the university sports centre. It is also clear from the second layout that the redeveloped sports centre is going to be fully indoor.

(169 words)

This is an answer which achieved a Band 6.5 score. Here is the examiner ‘s comment:

This answer addresses the main features of the redeveloped sports centre, but it could be improved by adding a brief description of the centre as it is at present.Another aspect of the response that could be improved would be to indicate where the various facilities will be situated in relation to each other: from the description above the reader cannot know where for example the gym, the leisure pool and the dance studios will be located. The range of vocabulary is above average, however and shows flexibility and precision. There is a variety of complex structures such as present and future verb forms, passive forms and relative clauses. There could be more variety in the language used to express future plans is over-used.

SAMPLE ANSWER 2

WRITING TASK 1 (MAP)

The accompanying plans outline the format of the university’s games community at the current second and the manner in which it will take care of a recreation.

As per the new format, the redeveloped sports place will increase. Firs, the exercise center will be bigger and an extra changing room will show up. Plus, there is going to be a games shop and a bistro in the gathering zone. Aside from that, 2 move studios are going to work inverse the rec center. At last, the games community will get another relaxation pool. It is going to be situated in where the outside courts used to be. As can be seen from the new design, both open air courts will be supplanted by different offices in the remodeled sports focus. Besides, a games corridor is qoing to show up in the college sports focus. It is additionally clear from the second design that the redeveloped sports place will be a completely indoor one.

(165 words)

This is an answer which achieved a Band 6 score. Here is the examiner ‘s comment:

This answer tends to the primary highlights of the redeveloped sports community, yet it could be improved by including a concise depiction of the middle all things considered at present.Another part of the reaction that could be improved is show where the different offices will be arranged corresponding to one another: from the portrayal over the peruse can’t know where for instance the rec center, the recreation pool and the move studios will be found. The scope of jargon is better than expected. There is an assortment of complex structures, for example, present and future action word structures, inactive structures and relative provisions. There could be more assortment in the language used to communicate likely arrangements

SAMPLE ANSWER 3

WRITING TASK 1 (MAP)

The gave plans delineate the format of the college’s games community right now and the manner in which it will take care of a reproduction.

As indicated by the new design, the redeveloped sports place will turn out to be a lot greater. To begin with, the rec center will be bigger and an extra changing room will show up in it. Additionally, there will be a games shop and a bistro in the banquet room. Aside from that, 2 move studios are appears to work inverse the rec center. At last, the games community will have another recreation pool. It will be built where the outside courts used to be. As can be seen from the new format, both of the outside courts will be supplanted by different offices in the remodeled sports community. Alongside it, a games corridor will show up in the college sports focus. It is additionally obvious from the second design that the redeveloped sports community will be completely indoor.

SAMPLE ANSWER 4

WRITING TASK 1 (MAP)

The gave plans depict the organization of the school’s games network at this moment and the way in which it will deal with a propagation.

As demonstrated by the new structure, the redeveloped sports spot will end up being significantly more prominent. In the first place, the rec focus will be greater and an extra switching room will appear in it. Moreover, there will be a games shop and a bistro in the meal room. Beside that, 2 move studios are seems to work converse the rec focus. Finally, the games network will have another amusement pool. It will be manufactured where the outside courts used to be. As can be seen from the new configuration, both of the outside courts will be displaced by various workplaces in the redesigned sports network. Close by it, a games hallway will appear in the school sports center. It is furthermore evident from the second plan that the redeveloped sports network will be totally indoor.

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Writing

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WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

SAMPLE ANSWER

Writing Task 1 – Bar Graph

The given chart visualizes how often the US citizens be at the fast food restaurants in the year 2003, 2006 and 2013.

From 2003 to 2006, the percentage of people who have never eaten at a fast food restaurant has dropped by 1%, but on the other hand during the same period the number of customers who eat fast food everyday has fallen to about 3% of the population. Since 2006, no other changes have occurred in these section of the chart.

The major changes can be seen in the groups, who prefer to eat in a fast food restaurants on a weekly basis and in the groups in which people visit the fast food restaurants once or twice a month or once a few months. While in 2006 most of the United States citizens ate at such facilities at least once a week, in 2013 most of the population did so only once or twice a month. It’s clear that the fast food restaurants were most popular in 2006 and least popular in 2013. However, the number of people who eat in such restaurants only a few times every year did not change.

As a whole, with the exception of people who rarely or never eat fast food and in addition, the small portion of the population who eat every day, the highest of going to fast food restaurants was reached in 2006 in contrast with 2013 when most of the population spent time in them only once or twice a month.

(235 words).

SAMPLE ANSWER 2

The diagram pictures how frequently the US residents be at the drive-through joints in the year 2003, 2006 and 2013.

From 2003 to 2006, the level of individuals who have never eaten at a drive-through eatery has fallen by 1%, however then again during a similar period the quantity of customers who eat cheap food ordinary has tumbled to about 3% of the populace. Since 2006, no different changes have happened in these fragments of the graph.

The significant changes can be found in the gatherings, who eat in a drive-thru eateries on a week by week premise and in the gatherings wherein individuals visit the drive-through joints on more than one occasion per month or once a couple of months. While in 2006 the greater part of the US residents ate at such offices in any event once per week, in 2013 the vast majority of the populace did so just a single time or two times every month. Obviously the drive-through eateries were generally well known in 2006 and least famous in 2013. In any case, the quantity of individuals who eat in such cafés just a couple of times each year didn’t change.

All in all, except for individuals who once in a while or never eat cheap food and also, the little piece of the populace who eat each day, the pinnacle of going to drive-through joints was reached in 2006 conversely with 2013 when the majority of the populace invested energy in them just a single time or two times per month.

(230 Words)

This is an answer to achieve a BAND 6.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

The competitor has given an away from and a review of the key phases of the procedure. Each stage is distinguished and depicted. There is an unmistakable in general movement, which each stage being motioned by proper markers. These markers are sufficient, yet a higher score may be accomplished by changing their situation in each sentence, as opposed to continually setting them toward the start. The scope of jargon is sufficient for the assignment and there are endeavors to be utilized more assortment. There is a blend of straightforward and complex sentence structures, including exact utilization of uninvolved structures. There are a few mistakes, however in any case the degree of exactness is acceptable. A similar degree of precision, over a more extensive scope of sentence structures, would build the score on Grammatical Range and Accuracy.

SAMPLE ANSWER 3

The outline pictures how as often as possible the US occupants be at the drive-through joints in the year 2003, 2006 and 2013.

From 2003 to 2006, the degree of people who have never eaten at a drive-through restaurant has fallen by 1%, anyway on the other hand during a comparative period the amount of clients who eat modest food customary has tumbled to about 3% of the masses. Since 2006, the same changes have occurred in these pieces of the diagram.

The huge changes can be found in the get-togethers, who eat in a drive-through diners on seven days by week premise and in the social events wherein people visit the drive-through joints time and again every month or once a few months. While in 2006 most of the US occupants ate at such workplaces in any occasion once every week, in 2013 by far most of the people did so only a solitary time or multiple times each month. Clearly the drive-through diners were commonly notable in 2006 and least well known in 2013. Regardless, the amount of people who eat in such bistros only a few times every year didn’t change.

All things considered, aside from people who on occasion or never eat modest food and furthermore, the little bit of the masses who eat every day, the zenith of going to pass through joints was reached in 2006 then again with 2013 when most of the masses put vitality in them only a solitary time or two times each month.

SAMPLE ANSWER 4

The layout pictures how as frequently as conceivable the US inhabitants be at the drive-through joints in the year 2003, 2006 and 2013.

From 2003 to 2006, the level of individuals who have never eaten at a drive-through café has fallen by 1%, at any rate then again during a relative period the measure of customers who eat humble food standard has tumbled to about 3% of the majority. Since 2006, similar changes have happened in these bits of the graph.

The immense changes can be found in the parties, who eat in a drive-through coffee shops on seven days by week premise and in the get-togethers wherein individuals visit the drive-through joints consistently or once a couple of months. While in 2006 the greater part of the US tenants ate at such work environments in any event once consistently, in 2013 by a long shot the majority of the individuals did so just a singular time or on different occasions every month. Plainly the drive-through burger joints were normally eminent in 2006 and least notable in 2013. Notwithstanding, the measure of individuals who eat in such bistros just a couple of times each year didn’t change.

Taking everything into account, beside individuals who once in a while or never eat unassuming food and moreover, the smidgen of the majority who eat each day, the apex of going to go through joints was reached in 2006 on the other hand with 2013 when the majority of the majority put imperativeness in them just a single time or multiple times every month.

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The Diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Sample Answer

IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The given diagram shows how electricity is produced by geothermal energy. There are five main steps in this process. First, in a big box connected underground, cold water is collected in order to be pumped down about 4.5 kilo meters.

After that, water is heated passing through hot racks called geothermal zone and it is sent up with pump up in order to be condensed in a big container. At this point, water is in a gas state that is called water vapors and it is sent to turbine which rotates the turbine to generate the electricity with the help of the generator which is the final step of the process chart. Finally energy is translated to a energy tower.

In summary, the geothermal power plant is used to create energy in some steps: heating cold water by a geothermal zone and condensing it in order to put it in a generator turbine which produces the electrical energy to be used.

(151 words)

This is an answer to achieve a BAND 6.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

The candidate has provided a clear introduction and an overview of the key stages of the process. Each stage is identified and described, although there are some minor errors in the reporting of stage 5. There is a room of expansion of the description of each stage, which could help to achieve a higher score. There is a clear overall progression, which each stage being signaled by appropriate markers. These markers are adequate, but a higher score might be achieved by varying their position in each sentence, rather than always placing them at the beginning. The range of vocabulary is adequate for the task and there are attempts to be used more variety here, though there are some examples of errors in word choice in word formation. There is a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, including accurate use of passive forms. There are some errors, but otherwise the level of accuracy is good. The same level of accuracy, over a wider range of sentence forms, would increase the score on Grammatical Range and Accuracy.

SAMPLE ANSWER 2

The graph shows how power is created by geothermal vitality. There are five general strides in this procedure. To start with, in a major box associated underground, cool water is amassed so as to be siphoned down about 4.5 kilo meters.

From that point onward, water is warmed going through hot racks called geothermal zone and it is siphoned up so as to be consolidated in a major compartment. Now, water is in a gas state and it is sent to turbine which pivots the turbine to create the power with the assistance of the generator which is the last advance of the procedure graph. At last vitality is meant a vitality tower.

In outline, the geothermal force plant is utilized to make vitality in certain means: warming virus water by a geothermal zone and gathering it so as to place it in a generator turbine which creates the vitality to be utilized.

(155 Words)

This is an answer to achieve a BAND 6.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

There is a blend of basic and complex sentence structures, including precise utilization of latent structures. There are a few mistakes, however in any case the degree of exactness is acceptable. A similar degree of precision, over a more extensive scope of sentence structures, would build the score on Grammatical Range and Accuracy.

SAMPLE ANSWER 3

The chart shows how electricity is made by geothermal imperative. There are five general walks in this methodology. To begin with, in a significant box related underground, cool water is amassed in order to be directed down about 4.5 kilo meters.

Starting there ahead, water is warmed experiencing hot racks called geothermal zone and it is directed up in order to be united in a significant compartment. Presently, water is in a gas state and it is sent to turbine which turns the turbine to make the force with the help of the generator which is the last development of the technique diagram. Finally essentialness is implied an imperative tower.

In layout, the geothermal power plant is used to make essential in specific methods: warming infection water by a geothermal zone and assembling it in order to put it in a generator turbine which makes the imperative to be used.

SAMPLE ANSWER 4

The graph shows how power is made by geothermal criticalness. There are five general strolls in this strategy. In the first place, in a critical box related underground, cool water is amassed so as to be coordinated down about 4.5 kilo meters.

Beginning there ahead, water is warmed encountering hot racks called geothermal zone and it is guided up so as to be joined in a critical compartment. By and by, water is in a gas state and it is sent to turbine which turns the turbine to make the power with the assistance of the generator which is the last improvement of the method outline. At long last centrality is inferred a noteworthiness tower.

In format, the geothermal force plant is utilized to make centrality in explicit techniques: warming contamination water by a geothermal zone and collecting it so as to place it in a generator turbine which makes the noteworthiness to be utilized.

SAMPLE ANSWER 5

The diagram shows how power is made by geothermal criticalness. There are five general walks around this procedure. In any case, in a basic box related underground, cool water is amassed in order to be facilitated down about 4.5 kilo meters.

Starting there ahead, water is warmed experiencing hot racks called geothermal zone and it is guided up in order to be participated in a basic compartment. Before long, water is in a gas state and it is sent to turbine which turns the turbine to make the force with the help of the generator which is the last improvement of the technique layout. Finally centrality is construed a significance tower.

In design, the geothermal power plant is used to make centrality in express procedures: warming pollution water by a geothermal zone and gathering it in order to put it in a generator turbine which makes the significance to be used.

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